Wow!! I can’t believe we’re
already three weeks into the course!! I must say, I’m not really looking
forward to it ending. So far it doesn’t
seem like we have learnt all that much, but when you actually look back to
where we were three weeks ago, we really have come a long way.
This week our lecture was on
Text. We also had a fabulous guest
lecturer, Skye Doherty. We started by
identifying text, basically what it is and how we use it. Text is fast, it’s
flexible and it’s portable, especially now with the technology that we
have. Text is searchable (Google has to
have something to use), it’s controlled and it dominates online. This is so true, sure a picture can give you
insight to a story, or take you in so you feel like you’re really there; but it
can’t describe the emotion, it can’t give you the facts in one quick simple
sentence and it can’t give you the full story.
Speaking of ‘full stories’, this leads me into the next part we
discussed – The ‘Inverted Pyramid’. I
swear, I have been seeing this thing around everywhere recently, and I must
say, at first it made me think of the food pyramid. But no… it is not.
The Pyramid looks a little
something like this
Basically, you have to provide
the most important information first. So
in the opening sentence, you have to mention who, what when, where, why and how
– the’ 5W’s and H’. This provides the
reader with enough information to know what the story about, and know what
happens even if they don’t want to read the whole thing. That been said however, this line should try
to capture the readers interest to lure them in to the rest of the story. A nice interview with a politician, a victim
or someone who would add importance and interest to the story can be added
here. The following paragraph should
provide further information about the story, still important information – but
not critical.
The paragraph after that
will again have information that will add to the story, but not as important as
the previous paragraph. This is the part
that they may want to include a nice eye-witness account, or interview someone
who was present.
Then the last very
small paragraph, sentence-long almost, is where they make any comments such as
“If you would like to help the cause, visit…” or “Investigations are
continuing”.
Basically, this one can be
very easily cut from a report if need be.
Hypertext. A beautiful thing as far as online newspapers
should be concerned. Hyperlinks can be
added basically anywhere and they can take you to recommended stories, similar
stories or pages providing further information on a particular topic.
I love the BBC News website, I’ll
admit it. Maybe it’s that they have a
slightly different perspective on things in the UK than we do in Australia, I
don’t know. But, something that I have
always noticed about the BBC is that they have a million hyperlinks to go along
with their stories. Here’s a quick print
of a story about the controversial mining tax the Government has just
introduced.
Note it has links to other
stories that may interest the reader of a riveting tale of mining, politics and
finance. For example one link – to the
story about the Sydney Harbour Bridge turning 80 another about Australia’s
booming economy or relations with the US, a tale about Gotye’s No. 1 hit or
even the increase of sharks on Australian beaches, the country profile and the
latest antics of our beloved politicians.
Headlines are probably the most
important part of a text story – especially in print. When a good headline is made, remember three
things
1. It must be true – You don’t want to tell a lie, otherwise it
puts doubt into the rest of the story, not to mention it is greatly frowned
upon in the news world
2. It should contain a verb – The riveting stuff you learnt in
grade 7 grammar class is being put to good use
3. You don’t need a pun.
Seriously, if every news headline had a cheesy pun, do you think
anything would be taken seriously?
After coming up with a magnificent
headline, you will need to understand just exactly how to set up your article.
The basic set-up looks like this:
‘Poynter Eyetrack’ states that
the best stories should be placed in the upper left of the page, followed by
the upper right. Photos, contrary to
popular belief, are not usually the entry point to the page.
Finally, we have reached the end of yet another week. This is the final slide i am going to show you, it's basically everything that text is, will be, can be and is hoped to be :)
Byee!!
Byee!!
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